Bob Dotson's stand up is toward the beginning in the middle when he is in the stands with the fans. He says the best spot to do a stand up is in the main body of the story because it gives the viewers information you can't visualize. You should have 3-5 key points in the middle of your story. I believe the key points in "The Boys of Winter" are there age, the guys today, George Bakewell's life (just married, excersising still), and baseball back in the day.
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